Dear Spiro Athanas,
Hello, my name is Zhabrina Gary. After reading your story I realize it's very long. It was a confusing story to me because it is some Spanish parts. The theme of the story is really good. It just takes time to really see the theme.
When I was little I used to be the baby of the family and didn't take responsibility. But after I got a little brother and sister I had to take care of them. It's like in the in the story the boy owned up and took his daddy's role after his father died. It's just like with me, I realized on my own that I had to be a grown up and take responsibility for someone else and myself. That is really coming of age. That's when you start too really grow up.
The theme of the story didn't realize what he had until it was gone. He found out that he loved his father more than he thought. Parents can be very embarrassing.
Sincerely,
Zhabrina Gary
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